The purpose of giving or telling Rolf where to find a CDi was never explained, and the mention of Conrad’s account is rather vague, though I can only assume that it was intended to mean the YouChewPoop account on Youtube.

I think it’s fine to write for the news page, but it would be far better to have clearer and better thought-out writing for it, especially if the whole point of filling this page is to get people to read it. This feels like merely spam in the news page.

Again, I don’t want to seem highbrowed, but I think better quality writing should be posted here if anything at all is going to be posted at all.

Of course, the obvious rebut to this would be something to the effect of, “If you don’t like it, do better, Rabbit.”